we’ve
got a sort of theater going
God and I
[The clouds pool eerie
yellow-green___]
It starts to storm and
like a fool I egg it on
eggja
[I can imagine the smile you
wear when you know
you’ve already won]
lightning flickers, I’m beckoning____
ensuing chaos
& it Is largely chaos
spiraling from control
like a grown man persuaded
to unload his whole
[Round]
My hair stands
on end just
waiting for the moment
when the power goes out
I’m still catching my breath
waiting for the cricket’s song
or
the applause
–LM
♥️
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Intriguing atmospheric lines carrying an ominous feeling!👏👏👏
A great write!😀🙏
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Thank you so much Didier!
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You are most welcome😃🙏
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Very powerful verses with a tense undercurrent. Beautiful! ❤ 👏
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Thank you ❤
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